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Finaly, the first chapter!


Forum: AvP Universe
Everything that makes up the worlds of Aliens, Marines and Predators.
Topic: Finaly, the first chapter!
Total Posts: 6

Razortech Xeno ...
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My new story is up so you should look at it in the Aliens area at GS, It may not be what you used to. Just post your thoughts here.

Blackdawn_70631
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It would be much better if you spaced it, all your paragraphs are just one big paragraph. Well, this is what I saw in Chap 1, haven't checked out Chap 2 yet.

Razortech Xeno ...
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The resson for that problem is i typed it in word so half the formating got deleted when i converted it to a text format.

Blackdawn_70631
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It's okay, nobody's perfect Just thought I should tell you in case you didn't know.
That happened to me a few times, with other sites, and I didn't know about it until a few days later.
I'll check out Chap 2 later on when I got some free reading time on my hands.

Razortech Xeno ...
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I'v slitly extended the end of chapter one and I will fix the rest hopfully soon. Oh and there is no chapter two yet, Im stll writing it.

Razortech Xeno ...
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I fixed the parograghes somewat.

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