Hey Xeno nuts there is a new fic i have started to post on GS so read it and tell me what you think!

what it called and also have you read my first story yet. it is called Creation of Alien Lord.

Na man i will have a look though

hey cool. but what is your story called. i would like to read it.

if your alien story has anything to do with your personality then your are a SEXIST PIG. FEMALES ARE NOT SLAVES FOR OUR ENJOYMENT. I HOPE VERY MUCH THAT THIS STORY DOES NOT REFLECT ON YOUR PERSONALITY. OMFG ANY MALE WHO IS A CHUAVANISTIC PIG GIVES A BAD NAME TO THE REST OF US MALES. .
Girls are to be treated better then males if you are a gentleman. i am sorry if your story does not reflect opun your personality but even writing that peice of SHIT is a disgrace to everbody. but other than that it is a very well written story and i am being serious here. just dont write so sexist.

SEXIST> listen i will not be spoken to like that. i have just about been kicked off tghis site for backinjg up a mate so will keep my kool. that is not sexist alright you must be (no offence) F**KED!!! every one has their
style of writting. i said on the iscription thing that it was for people 18+ only that is my recommendatio9n. if you can't handle it leave. i don't see in anyay how that is sexist. sentient beings enjoy such a session and i know of at least 1 person who will agree with me. you took a risk by reading it when i had specificlty stated that it had material not suitable for younger veiwers. surey you know what that means.

SEXIST> listen i will not be spoken to like that. i have just about been kicked off tghis site for backinjg up a mate so will keep my kool. that is not sexist alright you must be (no offence) F**KED!!! every one has their
style of writting. i said on the iscription thing that it was for people 18+ only that is my recommendatio9n. if you can't handle it leave. i don't see in anyay how that is sexist. sentient beings enjoy such a session and i know of at least 1 person who will agree with me. you took a risk by reading it when i had specificlty stated that it had material not suitable for younger veiwers. surey you know what that means.

i meant how you had the male alien boss arround the female aien. not the sex. and besides i supported you on that forum issue on deffending your friend even look for your self. the defense of woman is one of my few morals and you know how far that gets a lot of us. but i do it because it is right and i think you should wright done on the story that this story may be precieved as sexist. that was all. i am sry about losing my temper before.

Sorry if te fic offended ya. but it is the way of the Xeno. its all about rank. a male xeno is a praetorian. a praetorian more rank than a drone by miles. if this offends you then i am sorry. but it is the way of the pecking order, you have to understand.

i am sorry i have not slept in 36 hours so i am a little sensitive. your right males are preatorians and they do have rank above drones but senority should have affect also. but your right it is your story.

i am glad you understand this. now about your story it is interesting. though some areas need some work. don't take offence i'm just offering you some free advise.

but i will say again that it was a pretty good story you wrote i just didnt agree with some parts.

TY. and what advice would you suggest. oh bye the way i havent slaept in 36 hours so thats why i am a little hot headed.

and i believe sticking up for your freinds is the best thing in the world for a friendship.

Yeh i agree with ya there. and so did my mate. now about your story. don't akte offence to this but donh't you think it is a little far fetched? im sorry if this offends you but your story goes way beyond the bounderies of human and xeno complications. don't you agree? (oh shut up H'hirlanthsss!!!) that is my nicj name by the way, H'hirlanthsss or lanth one of the two!!

Woahhh - calm it down a bit! Phew! *wafts hot air away with a clawed hand*

Both stories have their merits, and their mistakes, and yes, a praetorian does outrank a drone, although she would have most likely never gotten herself into that situation where she got a thwackin'. Aliens I think would find it quite difficult to disobey, rank is so deeply instilled into them, she would have more likely come when he called her.

The alien baby then. OK, it's weird, but I'm intrigued by it. Anyway, define 'far-fetched'. How is it any more far-fetched than my stuff? Think about it. I've created a sentient, sexy Queen; she can think on an advanced tactical level. Then there's Si - born of human parents, yet by a quirk of fate, shares the Queen's DNA as well. We've already seen one reader's objection to my work, and there will most likely be others - some will like it, and some won't. The same applies for everyone else's work here.

Certainly, losing tempers does not help - better surely to discuss it calmly, like gentlemen? Discussion is a Good Thing.

Far fetched. you know. thers your stories then my stories and they are compliable. but a Xeno Human that can morph?!!!. im interested to but F**k me it came as a bit of a shock

It's no more weird than werewolves

WWho wrote about werewolves??

Do you want a list.... ?

What I'm saying is, there are stories of werewolves, so how is a human/alien creature any different? People changing into wolves = far-fetched, people changing into xenos = far-fetched. So why not?

Seems a fair comparison to me.