Ive just finnished uploading my Alien trilogy A chestbursters compassion. It recieved quite high praise when I put to planetavp so I thought I would put it on gamestory. Tell me what you think.

Great Fiction, mate! I had a sort of Tok'ra stile Xeno Story like yours planned ages ago but never got around to it. This is great Mate keep going!

Thanks coporal hicks, I really do appreciate every answer I get back. Even the bad ones, they help me improve myself.
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Come on guys this part of the site is dying. Hardly no one submits here anymore.
WE NEED FEEDBACK!

Come on guys, this place is going downhill (Alien universe stories that is)
We need more topics and feedbacks on this part.
It just seems that me and Hicks are answering in this place.

I've never been one to post on forums, but I do feel the need to share my thoughts on this subject. Your story was very imaginative, replacing the cold calculation of the Alien with a compassion usually reserved for other sentient beings. I enjoyed reading your submission, and look forward to more.

As for the involvement of others in submitting stories, I have to say that there is very little incentive to submit much of anything. Very little feedback is given on many of the contributions, and sometimes it seems like writers are falling into a competition. I'm not sure why, since there is no obvious grading system or awards for stories that I know of. But until I get bored, or told that my stories are no longer welcome here, I'll continue to write them and post them up for anyone interested in reading them. As for the forums, well, I have my own opinion about forums in general and am usually hesitant to post on them.

I liked your stories Erioc.
You should post more often, feel proud of your stories their great.

Heh awsome fic, even though im working on my own fic its always nice to see the work of my supiriors...

hehehe i love messing thigs up

lol

keep up with thoes fics dude!