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Forum: Alien Universe Stories
Giger's creature in action.
Topic: Working for the man: Part 2
Total Posts: 14

Acid-Death
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After a long time of writers block ive completed part two for working for the man. If you got time why dont you read it. Then reply here telling me what you think.
Posted: 2003-04-26 09:26

AlienSlof
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Yes!!!!! Finally!! The aliens fight back! More please...
Posted: 2003-04-26 10:33

Acid-Death
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thanx slof!! Great reply, I will.
Posted: 2003-04-26 10:36

M.O.A.B
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Man u'r stories r brilliant they're gettin better all the time!!
Posted: 2003-04-26 14:58

TIKI
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Hmm have not yet read it but sure will.
Posted: 2003-04-26 15:19

AlienSlof
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Quote:
Man u'r stories r brilliant they're gettin better all the time!!

I'll second that - a few odd little mistakes but the use of unique ideas is simply astounding! Get that next chapter out before I start biting people in frustration!
Posted: 2003-05-01 05:35

TIKI
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Big smile for that
Posted: 2003-05-01 10:29

Acid-Death
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Im sorry to hear that thoose mistakes spoiled you reading the story. But alot where never in the original me and a friend proofed it and a lot of those were never included.
Posted: 2003-05-01 14:59

AlienSlof
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No, far from it - you misunderstand - the mistakes are just minor - should have been picked up by your proofy really. They certainly don't spoil a damn fine read!
Posted: 2003-05-01 15:54

Acid-Death
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What did you think of the scene where the master was killed? I wasnt sure how to carry it out.
Posted: 2003-05-01 15:58

AlienSlof
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I liked it, but I think you should have had the drone drag his death out slower and more painfully, to reflect all the indignities she had suffered because of him. I know I would if I'd have been her!
Posted: 2003-05-01 16:23

Crazy Alien Lord
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I have to agree with everybody here. your storys are getting better and better. and well more original with each one. i like them alot. keep up the writing.
Posted: 2003-05-01 16:40

Acid-Death
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Dont worry yet slof, she lives in an appartment block full of people!!!
Posted: 2003-05-02 10:49

TIKI
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Posts: 1176

He he now thats funny
Posted: 2003-05-02 12:21

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