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chapter 5 of COAL
Forum: Alien Universe Stories
Giger's creature in action.
Topic: chapter 5 of COAL
Total Posts: 6
Giger's creature in action.
Topic: chapter 5 of COAL
Total Posts: 6
Crazy Alien Lord
Rank: 8
Posts: 1800
I have finally gotten my chapter five complete it is now on. please go and read it and then tell me what u think. anything u have to say i want to hear it. 
Posted: 2003-05-01 16:27
Crazy Alien Lord
Rank: 8
Posts: 1800
ok was my chapter 5 really this bad. 
i mean no comments on this.
please tell me what i need to fix or to do to make my story better.
i mean no comments on this.
please tell me what i need to fix or to do to make my story better.
Posted: 2003-05-02 16:36
Crazy Alien Lord
Rank: 8
Posts: 1800
ok well this is just a lively little thread. i am just going to blair my music now and play some halo. i will be back later tonight. so if by the chance that u have something to say about my latest chapter just put it here. see u all later.
Posted: 2003-05-02 20:22
Corpral Hicks
Rank: 0
Posts: 497
I noticed aa few spelling, grammar and capital mistakes. Good chapter. By the way cracking Avatar
Posted: 2003-05-03 12:41
Crazy Alien Lord
Rank: 8
Posts: 1800
thanks. i am glad that u liked it.
Posted: 2003-05-03 16:00
Crazy Alien Lord
Rank: 8
Posts: 1800
And i am glad u liked my avatar. thank u mods.
Posted: 2003-05-03 16:02
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