A god beyond mankind and The master of rape
Acid-Death
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today i made and uploaded two new stories (Thats a new record for me) but now why dont you read, the master of rape (Please dont complain about the title) and a god beyond mankind.
Posted: 2003-05-16 16:55
AlienSlof
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I've read both and they are GOOD

The facehugger one just got the right feeling of 'ugh' that facehuggers cause! The other one - I'm curious to see what that male alien is up to, following those ppl! Keep writing - I wanna know!
Posted: 2003-05-16 17:11
Acid-Death
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thanks slof.
Turns out the male one is the one i was doing in between the chestburster one. The facehugger one was just a bad dream i regret having.
Posted: 2003-05-16 17:16
AlienSlof
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A VERY bad dream
Posted: 2003-05-16 17:20
Acid-Death
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Good tip:
Dont eat cheese, drink coca cola and coffee in unison. Watch a back to back marathon of ALIEN and expect to have a good sleep!
Posted: 2003-05-16 17:23
AlienSlof
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Don't like coffee, though I do eat cheese and drink coke - preferably before I go to bed as it makes me dream. I like vivid dreams - very few have ever scared me! I like dreams that play out like horror movies - once had this cracking good one where I was being hunted down by an axe murderer - it rocked!
I have been having alien dreams since I first saw Alien when it was new and I love them - sometimes I'm chasing them, but more often I AM them - probably why I ended up writing in alien first-person mostly.
Posted: 2003-05-16 17:31
Acid-Death
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very rarely I play out as the alien, and when i do its disorientating and lacks sense. One time i was a facehugger, i had to watch as i sat on someones face!
But the being on the other end of one was a bad experiencing. Almost everything in the story was to do with my dream. Except the kissing part, i added that for grossness.
Posted: 2003-05-16 17:38
AlienSlof
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I guess I'm lucky in that respect - I'm never disoriented as the alien - even when i'm playing AvP2, I always know exactly where I am, which way up I am, etc. I once did the AvP2 version of Alien 3 in the leadworks map, running around on all the walls - a friend watching me do that was nearly throwing up! I can also do the bouncing from wall to wall a la Aliens
Posted: 2003-05-16 17:47
Acid-Death
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I was kind of worried about the title and the stories content e.g. rape, overpowering, forced sex. but I was in a big rush to complete it and my fingers were furious. I just hope no one is offneded.
Posted: 2003-05-16 17:50
AlienSlof
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I'm not - the reason why I'm not is that is EXACTLY why Giger created the facehugger like it is - the very thought of something nasty raping your face - eeuuuwww!
Posted: 2003-05-16 17:52
Acid-Death
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Thats why i feared them for so long, the thought of opening your eyes to see its underbelly spread across your face. Thats what the story was based around, not looking up and seeing it, wishing it would go away. And the fact hes trapped in the helmet.
Posted: 2003-05-16 17:56
AlienSlof
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And it works beautifully! Keep em coming!
Posted: 2003-05-16 17:58
Acid-Death
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Thanks for the encouragement slof
Bye the way hows the pic coming.
Posted: 2003-05-16 18:00
AlienSlof
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Haven't even thought about it yet - been busy with hive improvements all day
Posted: 2003-05-16 18:06
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Posted: 2003-05-16 23:15