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Topic: Da'tou's Story...
Total Posts: 30

Skar'ku_Mar'kel-ja
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Yautja fans listen up, go to GS andread this

It is by far the best piece of work i have ever seen from Black Dawn, very, very impressive indeed. Excellent work Dawn.
Mar.
Posted: 2003-11-17 07:20

R'iithsss the D...
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Ohhhh pretty.....*drools*

Gud work Dawn keep it up!!
Posted: 2003-11-17 09:17

Crazy Alien Lord
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hmmmmmm. it seems mar has some competition. pretty good black dawn. keep it coming.
Posted: 2003-11-17 11:25

TIKI
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Cool an other good Yautja story!!!
Posted: 2003-11-17 12:02

yeth
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Good chappie, keep it coming
Posted: 2003-11-17 14:31

Blackdawn_70631
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Thanks guys.
Posted: 2003-11-17 19:09

Crazy Alien Lord
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dont thank us. just get more of that story out.
Posted: 2003-11-17 21:54

Skar'ku_Mar'kel-ja
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Quote:
hmmmmmm. it seems mar has some competition. pretty good black dawn. keep it coming.


Competition? There is no competition, i thought you in particular would know that. There is no fighting for top spot, no one here cares about that kinda stuff. Just people who love writting and when people give them encouragement, it feels really good, all of us know that.
Mar.
Posted: 2003-11-18 07:02

R'iithsss the D...
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Lol, writting...hehe....writting...looks like Mar has invented a new word.

But anyways id say ur right Mar, there is no competition, if there was ppl would care about being 'numero uno' more instead of just plain being friends and take the pleasure to read eachothers great work. But i do have to say Dawns work matches up to yours Marry but i love the work of both of yu *gives hug* make more, make more!! MAKE MORE MGWAHAHAHA!!!
Posted: 2003-11-18 09:02

Crazy Alien Lord
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i didnt mean competition as in a turnament thing.
i meant it as in there is a new pred writer here. i didnt say it the right way before but thats what i meant.
Posted: 2003-11-18 14:37

Nuthouse_Escapee
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i know whatcha mean alns - it's so hard to carry over emotions and sarcasm in type!
Posted: 2003-11-18 14:47

Nuthouse_Escapee
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and no, that last one wasn't a sarcasm
Posted: 2003-11-18 14:48

R'iithsss the D...
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Uhmm nutty....werent yu always sarcastic j/k But anyways Lord if yu did ment it to be like yu mentioned in ur last post then i gues its okay misunderstandments is a part of live yah know, it happens...
Posted: 2003-11-19 09:05

Skar'ku_Mar'kel-ja
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Ok, Chappy 2 is up at GS
Posted: 2003-11-20 00:21

Blackdawn_70631
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I have a picture of Da'tou and Gr'it-in drawn by an online friend. To view it go to the link below:

Da'tou and Gr'it-in
Posted: 2004-02-17 14:41

Blackdawn_70631
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I had no idea I'de be going this far with Da'tou's Story.
Chapter Ten is up, Da'tou mates for the first time and has to tangle with another hit man.
What have you guys thought of the story so far? Do you like where it's going?
And I am going back to make some major touch ups on the chapters once it's finsihed.
Posted: 2004-06-06 16:35

hardkoreUSMC
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Ch10 is cool. The story keeps gettin better.

Serious Props.
Posted: 2004-06-12 23:02

kuroikappa
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So far, so good. I am really enjoying this story. Great job Dawn.!
Posted: 2004-09-14 14:57

Blackdawn_70631
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Thanks, glad you liked it. Started working on chapter thirteen last night and will hopefully have it up in a week to two weeks.
Posted: 2004-09-15 10:29

kuroikappa
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So far this is one of the best stories I've read. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Posted: 2004-09-16 09:52

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