Hi All,
If I could post a link to GS I would, but don't know how.

But here it is the new and improved story of The Tracker...
Where Jillian a human finds carnage, an alien hunter.. and his prey...
Will she survive? Read ON!!

Da 'Yeyinde

Here you go Da'Yeyinde.

The Tracker

as i have said before its very well writen.

Lordy Lordy Lordy..
what would I do with out you man!!!
Thanks tons.

Da'Yeyinde

Some good shit you're cookin Dayeyinde,

Props.

Whoaaa, awesome prologue Da'Yeyinde. Haven't read the other chapters but will reach them in time.
Good job!

Hey Dawn...
You gotta thank ALNS for the prolouge.. I just tweaked it!!

I am gonna give credit where its due.

But thanks, and read on my friends..

I do feel like a twit for pulling it in the first place.
I am waiting for a fight scene to be emailed to me. And I will be retweaking the other chapters in the next week.

Question/???
Does any one have a problem IF I jump ahead in the story??
I got lots of stuff I want to post, but there are gaps.. I will be filling the gaps, but already have stuff to post.

Just want your opinions.

Thanks
Da yeyinde

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Does any one have a problem IF I jump ahead in the story??

I would rather prefer you not to jump around in gaps and whatnots, doing that may 'cause confusion in the story and toward the characters. It's alright to do that in a draft, so you won't forget some details/important scenes and move on to the next chapter/scene then go back to fill in the rest (I have a bad habit of doing that) but not leaving in gaps. . . . tweaking a chapter later on after posting it would be alright, but not that.
Well, that's my opinion. Be back later.

Okay!
Its not really jumping ahead in the story.. its just I feel that I will need some filler. After chapter five, which will be up as soon as its tweaked, I will to put something in.. haven't come up with it yet,
Before another key plot thing and a big chapter or a couple of smaller chapters, that I have already written.

Basically what I have is chapt 1-5.. (?)chapters 8-10.. long part that is in my head then a huge written part...
Then the parts of what would be a book 2 OR more of book 1. Including the ending, and a bunch of other neat stuff.
So that is where I am at....
Any ideas,..


Da 'Yeyinde

lol That sounds just like the problem I'm having with a new story of mine. Not sure if I'll post but it's being such a pain that I have to get it out of my head and onto paper.
Just try, even force yourself to take it slow and not to rush into it.