Hey all, i was wondering if anyone wanted to give some feedback on my latest project Worthy Adversary. If anyone thinks im not doing something too well (ie too vague in some areas, not enough description of some things etc), tell me and i can improve on it in later chapters and (eventually) later stories.

alternatively you can shower me with praise

k thanks c ya

Well I only read the first capter (Where is the predator) perhaps I will read the other (Where are the skinned bodies).

Well I read what you have posted so far it was really good the predator seems to be a really cruel hunter (that is a good thing).



the pred arrives a little late in the story don't you think.

Oh and one more thing please let there be only one pred then he would have to last until the end and that would make the pred seem more invinsible.

Preds are better invisible, they seem invisible when they last all the way through, what if, he wins the entire thing, that would be good!

Preds are never invisible to us. don't want to sound like a jack ass. sorry but its true

Coming from a fan of both aliens and preds in the game I have to say that they both can see eachother wit ease. The other day I was a light pred and was being tracked by like 3 or 4 xenos. The little bastards were tracking me by my pheramones. Tricky devils so I switched my vision and they were lit up like a christmas tree. Then I move in circles to confuse them and end up spearing most of them before they know whats up. Poor xenos.

I always play as Skar'ku, Mar'kel-ja. he is my main man!!. my fav weapon against xenos would have to be the combistick.

WELL i always play as Alien Lord. since it is like my secound personality. i have never changed my name on from alien lord on any sci fi games. as pred my all time favorite weapon is the spear gun. as human my wepaon is the double pistols. i am invincible with them. well nearly. i am over all a good match on any species.

i know!!

Umm I think we have had some confusion up there, Cliff I think was saying they were "inviceable" or Immortal, I think (think) cougar was also referring to Ivincible, IE Immortal as well, not invisible,

By the way pretty good fic

Yea now that I think about it I love getting close to the action probably from being a mostly alien man. I just use the wrist blade/combi stick