Hey pred adicts. if you want another fic to read head to GS and check out mine and Preli new one. its posted on my account so it will be under my name. hope you like it. be warned, use of unapropriate language is present!

You don't say...

Very disappointed indeed in you.

Yes well it has been moded so now if i get the boot at least there will have been a change!!

And everyone who was offended by this fic. i am sorry. it has been modified so it has very little swearing in it now. so if i et the boot at least most of you will be happier wif me gone. notice i haven't said anything about preli.
he was givin the first chapter and the prologue by me coz he knows more about pred than i do, he sent it back and i posted it. it should be me that gets it in the neck. i was the one who posted it i could have altered it before posting but i just didn't think i guess the excitment of finally posting this fic took me over. we had been working on it for like a month. well i any one doesn't see me again you know what has happend.

Doesn't look much changed to me. The C-word is still there and is so INAPPROPRIATE for preds. They just sound like immature humans.

I wash my four hands of the lot of you.

Oh damn o it is must have missed it change it now

There's inappropriate, which you warned about. Then there's OBSCENE, which you didn't, and even if you did I'd be utterly AMAZED if that's what Demi wants on his site. And you wonder where the mature audience is gone.
Me? Oh, I just dropped by to say "This proves my point."

Anise.

Sloffy, shall we go huntin' fresh game? I fancy a tender pred, got a nice marine her for you (dangles a marine infront of Sloffy).

Yep thats right EVERY ONE GET AT ME WHILE YOU STILL CAN!!! cmon by the way things sound i may as well just go and slash my wrists.

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Oh damn o it is must have missed it change it now

Doesn't look changed to me. Stop lying now.

This is just about it now from me, I'm seriously thinking of leaving once and for all, had enough of all this BS.

I don't lie. ever. i may be a lot of other things but i don't lie it HAS been changed by the way.

jeez, and you were giving everybody heaps about how they treated preli...

sounds like you may have to go over it again, marcuspred.

and dont even joke about slashing wrists. i am deadly serious here. ive had to many bad experiences.

if you do go, slof, we'll miss ya, but its your choice and we can always go to your webbie. and i can understand about being sick of the bullshit. im only 15, and most of my life was spent being sick of it (only half joking)