Stories and other...
When two lethal xenoc species encounter humans.
Topic: Stories and other...
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Robert_Wren
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1-AvC is on a hold until Kaht'Ay gets back.
2- Read Outcast yet? Please read!
3-No one's PMed me 'bout the AGN Valentines, why not?
I've also got some Q's directed at specific members:
Slof- Is it OK if I mention the empress?
I'll think of more eventually...
AlienSlof
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| Slof- Is it OK if I mention the empress? |
Feel free.
Robert_Wren
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D'ja check out Outcast?
Crazy Alien Lord
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or atleast not for a while...
Robert_Wren
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Any way no one commented on OutCast. I'm downloading Ch.2 right now
Robert_Wren
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Crazy Alien Lord
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ok as far as ur new story Outcast. i read the beggining. well compared to what my first works submitted here looked like its pretty good. or alteast better then my first works were.
but here lets keep things simple. give me one strong reason on why someone would want to read ur story. then when u have that writen down go create a newsie and put that strong reason. goodluck
Robert_Wren
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When I first started witing the story on paper I did it just to fill up my time frame. But now that I look at it, it's much more than "space fillers". It reflects how I feel about Aliens and Predators. To live among a hive of Xeno's was my childhood dream. When I look over this I remember what inspired me to dream. I now believe in my dream...
Writing this reflects my life.
A lonley kid who just wants someone who can really understand him. Friends are OK but someone who can know what you like without directly telling them. As I said before, my friends can sometimes annoy because they don't know when to back down and they no nothing of AvP...
Doing this is expressing my feelings for my life.
It's an "I wish it would be" life story of myself... I don't know why anyone would want to read it and I don't care. Just knowing someone is out there who read this went, "Wow, this is actually good" is enough for me.
Everyone made fun of me because I'm geeky and no one cares. Just seening my openly displayed is perfect for me, good feedback or otherwise...
Just knowing someone will eventually look at it gives me a warm feeling inside. Also that it will be read by TRUE AvP fans...
PS- I do care I care a lot! More than anyone can imagine...
Blackdawn_70631
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You know almost each chapter to my story, Da'tou's Story, has been read around 100 times or more, thanks to PlanetAvP, and only around five people or so has commented on it. From what I found out on other sites and all, I have readers that love my work, all are Predator stories.
Quote from a reviewer on another site, "This is a good story, like all you others."
That was the first comment I recieved from that person, then with another story I took off to rewrite, a reader reviewed one of my stories saying it was a good read and what happened to the story I took off, that was another who liked yet didn't comment on it.
Anyway, there are people out there who really like your stories, but most of them for some bizarre reason will not comment.
I try to keep up with the stories around here and try to comment, depending when my computer feels like working, but have been too busy lately to read or give any comments.
I've been seing this thread posted for a couple of days, something like that, and just today was able to reply because my computer wasn't on the fritz, sometimes it'll be like this for a month.
eh....no offense to GS, but Wren, I know at least one site that will give you a better chance at having your stories reviewed.
Blackdawn_70631
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AlienSlof
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Don't nag people into reading, it's not very becoming! They'll read it when they are ready! Just recently PAvP posted up about various stories on GS (except mine as they weren't AvP related!). Plus it works both ways - read and comment on someone else's and they might be more inclined to return the favour.
Robert_Wren
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How about fixin Dr. Blaines "I just doomed the entire human race" thing with the nanobots?
I allready have a very good plan!
Or I could think up something else... maybe a Yautja short story...I get it eventually
Robert_Wren
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Don't know what I'm saying
Crazy Alien Lord
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AlienSlof
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Robert_Wren
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| It's like I've said before, no-one uses the comments feature on GS, despite my asking Prezes to extend the character limit so people could comment in greater detail. |
I do copmment, or at least when I can...
I commented on DoX I and II via PM.
I recently read Preadatory instinct and I love it
Actually I have to thank you Slof for inspiration through the ages. Most of my ideas have been slight cut offs from your ideas. IE- the Blaine dooming human race thing. I found the solution
Being a fanatic of drastic proportions, I recently wrote a very unnerving story...
Alien -v- Predator -v- T-Virus Zombie -v- Werewolf and might post it up
Skar'ku_Mar'kel-ja
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Now what else was i gunna say... oh yeh, just because no one comments on your fictions doesn't mean they arn't respected or looked upon highly. Since being back for a very short time, i checked the newsies, and found your fic, amongst others from my Youngling, Sloffy and ALNS, But i read outcast and i liked it, few typos here and there and some scene skipping, but good work Robbo. Keep it up.
Mar.
Robert_Wren
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Sorry for the pressing
Mutagen Corporation- we got zombies and Aliens! (not to mention the random twisted mutation)
Skar'ku_Mar'kel-ja
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| Glad people like it Sorry for the pressing Mutagen Corporation- we got zombies and Aliens! (not to mention the random twisted mutation) |
Mutagen... you been playing too much SOF2!
Crazy Alien Lord
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got a suggestion for u.
when u read this just stop everything ur doing. relax. take a deep breath and just relax. now as u are relaxed. look at all the things that get u stressed out. look at how big of a deal they really are and then just look at them and say
" im not going to let u get me stressed out"
i dont know it kinda worked for me rob. so good luck if u try it.
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