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When two lethal xenoc species encounter humans.
Topic: Predatory Instinct
Total Posts: 141

AlienSlof
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Just uploaded is a new project between Skar'ku Mar'kel-ja and myself, called Predatory Instinct. Give it a read and tell us what you think! Should be uploading Chapter 2 very soon too.
Posted: 2003-05-12 07:38

Crazy Alien Lord
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i read the beginning of the prologue. so far so good. will finish later tonight.
Posted: 2003-05-12 16:12

Crazy Alien Lord
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Quote:
there are still the odd few who dare to break the peace

how did u guys know that. did mark tell u slof that i was going to have some one fight the peice. arggg. well now if he didnt now i have totally let every one know. ohh well. hmmm i wonder who i could be talking about breaking the peice. hmmm. tall muscular. two swords. alien human half bread. i wonder. who could that be. well now i have to get that done also. now i have 4 things to write.
Posted: 2003-05-12 17:00

AlienSlof
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??????

Didn't get any of that... have I missed something somewhere?
Posted: 2003-05-12 17:15

Crazy Alien Lord
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umm no just random chats with mark on ODIGO. sorry forget my rambling.
Posted: 2003-05-12 17:55

Crazy Alien Lord
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any way u did do me a huge favor inadvertantly by saying that. although if i may say i think that was a bit of foreshadowing for later on in ur story.
Posted: 2003-05-12 18:30

Skar'ku_Mar'kel-ja
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that nice, dunno what the hell you are talking about but keep on topic please! oh and chapter 2 will be posted later today/tonight (depends on where you are)
Posted: 2003-05-12 20:41

Crazy Alien Lord
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yeah sorry about my random tangents. sleep deprivation does that. ( my alarm clock got zapped from a recent lightning storm and now it is crazy)
but over all i love it. i like the girls. =)
Posted: 2003-05-12 20:46

AlienSlof
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Chapter 2 is up now Mark's finished with it - we hope it meets with approval.
Posted: 2003-05-13 04:24

Skar'ku_Mar'kel-ja
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Thank you Slof! and yes chapter 3 is gunna be out asap, got a few things to do tho, but in what, about 3-4 days max, Slof?
Posted: 2003-05-13 06:14

Corpral Hicks
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I am reading it now and wondering how do you manage to do joint stuff when each of you are half was across the world?
Posted: 2003-05-13 12:32

Corpral Hicks
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Nice, I noticed about 2 mistakes and thats it. Also I am interested in how wrote which bit!
Posted: 2003-05-13 13:04

AlienSlof
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Where were the mistakes? I'll zap 'em with my zapping stick!

See if you can work out which of us wrote which bits!
Posted: 2003-05-13 14:59

Crazy Alien Lord
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Posts: 1800

i read it earlier today. i have to say that it is pretty damn good. but one thing. markelja and the queen seemed to create an alliance pretty quickly. but then again an honorable warrior will do that. but over all i loved the new chappie. u two make a great team on this.
Posted: 2003-05-13 15:16

Crazy Alien Lord
Rank: 8
Posts: 1800

Soon deadly aliance should have another chapter up. The writers block got blown to bits after i watched some TV.
but i have to say PI looks like it will be great. It certantly is already good.
Posted: 2003-05-13 18:39

AlienSlof
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Quote:
I am reading it now and wondering how do you manage to do joint stuff when each of you are half was across the world?


Well, one of writes a bit, then PM's it to the other, and vice versa - eventually it all gets done, proofed, tweaked and uploaded! It is a bit odd, when one's awake the other's asleep!
Posted: 2003-05-14 04:33

Skar'ku_Mar'kel-ja
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Posts: 1940

Yeh its a goddam laugh!! i am walking around in the workshop at work, thinking about sloffy all curled up on her nest, then think why i am at work and not bak at my flat working on the fic!!
Posted: 2003-05-14 04:49

killadutch
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Posts: 338

yes a preddy story
aka the best ones

excellent work, its good readin
Posted: 2003-05-14 09:30

Crazy Alien Lord
Rank: 8
Posts: 1800

Quote:
See if you can work out which of us wrote which bits

hmm let me think. mark wrote the pred part and slof did the alien part. who would have thought.
Posted: 2003-05-14 10:36

Corpral Hicks
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Posts: 497

LOL!
Posted: 2003-05-14 10:42

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