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		Today is Thursday, 2010-09-09 Forum Moderatorz: the_demigod, Nostromo, dvVIII, Prezes, Idoru, yeth AbsoluteGamerzNetwork Forum Index >>> Alien Universe Stories >>> PAR Author     PAR Crazy Alien Lord Rank: Site Bo$$ Posts: 1800   Posted on: 2003-09-05 13:34 I have started a new story called Pain and Retribution go have a read and tell me what u thought. is it gud. did it suck. what would u have done to make it better. any i hope u liked reading the prologue of it.      Home Page  |   User Profile   |   Quote Crazy Alien Lord Rank: Site Bo$$ Posts: 1800   Posted on: 2003-09-21 18:10 ok now my 1 chapter is up go have a read and tell me what u think.      Home Page  |   User Profile   |   Quote Crazy Alien Lord Rank: Site Bo$$ Posts: 1800   Posted on: 2003-09-23 15:53 does it suck that much.      Home Page  |   User Profile   |   Quote yeth Rank: Fragger Posts: 234   Posted on: 2003-09-24 08:16 No , it's good.      Home Page  |   User Profile   |   Quote Crazy Alien Lord Rank: Site Bo$$ Posts: 1800   Posted on: 2003-09-24 08:29 ok thanx that makes me feel better.      Home Page  |   User Profile   |   Quote alienprincess Rank: Fragger Posts: 110   Posted on: 2003-11-06 12:56 Suck???? what is the defination of suck? *looks around* ok no your stories dont suck and this one doesnt but i will say this: the ONLY way a story is bad is if it can not keep the readers attention and all even this one holds my attention despite my lack of sometimes comprehending what is going on since i got a ways to go till i do. but hey who goes from fantasy to sci-fi in a single night? lol AP       User Profile   |   Quote     Log in to post