This is like the other never ending story... same kinda rules (NO 4 PARAGRAPH THINGS 20 sentences max PLEASE)



This story is about a renegade predator





Klloi'Juit, Also reffered to as KJ, Was always a rebel to his predator supremes. He was always very good with weapons and he liked to Mess with peoples minds. He was protecting his area when he noticed a marine at the end of the hallway. He Withdrew his Combispear when...

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A white duck walked up to him and yelled enthusiastically, "AFLACK!" KJ kicked the bird out of the way, but also noticed the Marine had fled. He sneered, and began to quickly jog down the passage, to track down the marine. He had just rounded the corner, when...

That danm girl scout with the cookies asked if he wanted a cookie. He then immediatly pulled out his acid rounds and killed the girl scout and threw her aside "FARJEN ASCLOAI" he shouted and continued to walk down the corridor when...

Another girlscout came out from the shadows and asked if hed like a cookie, he shouted "Tarei hsan" which translates to unworthy oppenant and continued to run down the hallway because of all the time wasted by girlscouts. He ran almost as fast as an alien would untill he rounded the corner when he saw...







(where i got the predator wording was from http://www.geocities.com/Hollywood/Highrise/7256/)

The marine! But he was a gored body with a big gaping hole through his chest. KJ was very interested in knowing what killed him. So he...

Decided not to investigate because he has no time. He has to gaurd his ground because he got a threat from another predator who is trying to expand his area. Danm NEWBLOODS think that they are all that. So he continued to patrol...

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when he was shot in the side. He turned quickly only to see three marines with their guns pointing at him. "You killed Tucker! You ALIEN BASTARD!" one of the marines yelled as they opened fire...

too bad that he was fast enough to dodge bulllets, you should know that, he said to the marines. Fortunately he knew english, so you know, he told them that and then he cut one into shreds with his combispear and the rest ran away, he continued persuit when...

He was knocked down by a marine wearing a large suit of powered armor. "I'm taking you down alien."...

It was his mistake he accidently ran into the power armored marine. He let out a warcry and proceeded to tear him limb from limb. After completely destroying him he ate his body. He continued on when...

the rest of the power-suited unit showed up, and.......

He ran around the corner and cloacked. He noticed 6/7 of them round the corner. He ran around the corner still cloacked and clotheslined him. He then jammed his combispear threw the glass encasing the head and pierced right threw the head. He slid against the wall as so he wouldnt be moving so that he wouldnt be seen. Someone had ran back to hear what the noise was. Kj jumped forward and ripped the mechanical head off and using some strength smashed the head in his hands. He was proud of this. No more of the mechanical suits came. He waited atleast an hour to make sure they had gone far. He then continued on...

…he took a couple of steps forward before his left leg folded beneath him. Whilst still supporting him self with his right leg, he turned to look behind him. Nothing, the vision enhancement hardware didn’t indicate anything either. Now his right arm refused to move. He took a look at his leg.

Muscle, bone, green blood everywhere. The instincts began to take over; he dived into a nearby corridor for cover. The left thigh devastated, a high velocity-armour-piercing-high-explosive round had ripped through the thin alien armour and though skin. Some of the Predator bone stuck out of the wound, muscles hanging loose. The right arm was severed just above the elbow.

“What could have could have done thins?” thought Klloi'Juit to himself.

Unseen, the human sniper waited for the next target....

The red targeting laser snaked across the wall...

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… the young yautja watched as his sparring companion died by the hands of this insignificant ooman, he was never any good, H’joi, and now he lay there in a pool of his own blood. Caught in such a simple trap, he deserved to die, he did not even deserve to be mentioned when the hunt is over.

The wrist blades slid out of their travel position and locked into place, they drove deep into the body of the hiding marine.

The stupid thing never knew what killed him; he only felt a sharp pain race through his body before the darkness came. K’oui twisted them left, and then right, the ribs and spine cracked loudly for all to hear. He let out a cry of victory….

[ This message was edited by: Prezes on 2001-12-28 18:08 ]