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Forum: AvP Universe
Everything that makes up the worlds of Aliens, Marines and Predators.
Topic: The dating game
Total Posts: 224

Crazy Alien Lord
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for a first timer that wasnt half bad. why dont u continue it.

Nuthouse_Escapee
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yeah, not bad except for the mistakes you pointed out, everybody makes spelling/grammar mistakes! continue, please

D'harknsss
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hey i posted one so now it's ur turn

Nuthouse_Escapee
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bleah, i'm not in that "writing mood" i can't do anything now! maybe latah

D'harknsss
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well i can do 2 posts in a row,wouldnt b fair now would it?

Crazy Alien Lord
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u left it in a hard spot. wether to do the realistic thing which im known not to do. or to do the unrealistic thing.

Deaderalien
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Ragna desided that they would try there luck with the shuttle.
becuase there were aliens on this planet it might be a bad idea to stay.They ran for the shuttle and started it up and took off.Slitthesss watched wondering why they left.
the shuttle was a human ship so victoria CALLED them.
They said they could dock and the shuttle opened up...
when they got inside armed soilders were waiting to escort them out. they were sent to talk to the capton all the civilions they passed gave them strange looks.
they talked to the capton and he said his name was Sam.
they told him there story and he said they could stay or they would refeul them and give them food to continue.

1:decide to stay and take rooms

2:ask to share a room.

3:take the food and fuel and leave
okay my second try to righting a chapter in this book how did i do?

Deaderalien
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maybie we should put this book in the lit section

Crazy Alien Lord
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once were done with it yes. we will have someone put it in the lit section.

Crazy Alien Lord
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nice one deaderalien

D'harknsss
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oh oh! sloffy moment time ,say hello to sloffy number 2

They decided to stay on the shuttle and Victoria and K'thay asked R'agna if he wanted to share their room,they asked him with a desiring tone and a seductive grin on their faces.R'agna couldnt help but be aroused by it but wonders what the passengers would say.

1)"Share" room (know what i mean since it sloffy moment )
2)Find a room with another human aboard the ship
3)Say no and take his own room

Deaderalien
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thanks

Deaderalien
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um should i wright next 1?

D'harknsss
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who cares,as long as no1 does double post

Nuthouse_Escapee
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Uh... thanks for um, not continuing that sentance

And good one dharkness, if you made them a lllliittle loooonnnggeerrrr it would be perfect

D'harknsss
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oh i know what he means ,i'd do too

Acid-Death
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Quote:
maybie we should put this book in the lit section



Quote:
once were done with it yes. we will have someone put it in the lit section.



Well once this is done (if it ever does get done) I'm writing this into a proper full on story for gamestory, so thanks everyone for the contributions and insights

Deaderalien
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Posts: 124

no problem

Crazy Alien Lord
Rank: 8
Posts: 1800

i think i speak for all involved when i say
our pleasure. if i dont feel that it was an accurate depiction of ur feelings feel free to flame me all u want.

Nuthouse_Escapee
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Posts: 838

I think this thread has had the most ups and downs of any thread on the agn... from bitter cat fighting, to pat-on-the-back writing .

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